Funny how things fall together sometimes

[folderol]

... emailed before you have the chance to change your mind

[Laguna Rising]

Cool dense atmosphere, well done, Will !
I can see there's an evolution with vocals and maybe other things
I look forward to hear the modified version 

Cheers

[folderol]

Thanks L.R.

I think we are are close to a new version.

The singing is rather difficult. Neither James nor me is used to covering such a wide range. I think thats partly down to me not being used to composing for singing but for instrumental performances. Also that key change on the last verse is a killer, although it makes a lot of difference to the song.

[Servetus]

Very pretty reverb. I'm curious how the next version will morph. (and will reserve further thoughts 'till then.  )

-Servetus