Some nice ideas in this one. Your playing is a bit hurried and strained it seems. Learn to relax while playing. Keep the right wrist subtle. (assuming your right-handed)
Thanks Martin,
..first, the song is a tense song..about a narrow escape to freedom..and since this song was about something I lived through, yes, it was also tense for me.
..still too close in time to a hard road already traveled.
..good tip, thanks..I added it to my 'guitar professor' thread.
Wyatt