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NeoN
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Hollow Sun (Kompoz song)
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September 18, 2017, 03:54:06 PM »
Here's another slower-paced song of mine called
Hollow Sun
.
The truth is, I never experimented with this rhythm before but I am starting to like it.
Hollow Sun
Music & Composition: NeoN
Solo Guitars: JonA33
Bass & Vox: GeorgeSC
Lyrics: BKWilliamson
My life's an open book
Pages in the wind
Pictures clear as daylight
Still burning in my mind
Knowing you could always
Read between the lines
Screaming in the darkness
Outside an open door
Voices of the heartless
Crying out for more
Chorus
I used to believe the sun
Would shine again
But it's a Hollow sun
You know my friend
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So many voices
Locked inside my head
Swallowed by the silence
Is my only defence
It changes with the seasons
From grey to black
Looking for the reasons
Falling into the cracks
My tears are in the past
Now I'm just walking
On broken glass
With a Hollow sun
Enjoy!
Peter
n_hollowsun_v2.mp3
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folderol
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Re: Hollow Sun (Kompoz Song)
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September 18, 2017, 05:12:06 PM »
Very
VERY
impressed with this.
It has tantalising 'flavours' of some classic late '60s to early '70s groups.
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MarioD
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Re: Hollow Sun (Kompoz Song)
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September 22, 2017, 11:05:37 PM »
Quote from: folderol on September 18, 2017, 05:12:06 PM
Very
VERY
impressed with this.
It has tantalising 'flavours' of some classic late '60s to early '70s groups.
I agree with Will.
I think this is fantastic
Great vocal, backing tracks, and an outstanding guitar lead
Note there is a lot of dead space at the end of the song. You may want to cut that out.
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