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I've just dragged this out of the cupboard for reworking and am looking for suggestions. My first thought is that the transistion from 'morning' to lazy 'afternoon' is a bit too abrupt, and those horns are a bit suspect too.
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Oren
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« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2009, 03:07:08 AM » |
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It is what it is, Will - another stroll in the Folderol Zone, and one of the more enjoyable ones.  Strangely compelling.....  |
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« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 03:22:25 PM » |
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Hi Oren, I'm very pleased you like this, but are you saying I should leave it as it is  I was rather expecting some suggestions for improvements  |
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« Reply #3 on: September 05, 2009, 03:36:13 AM » |
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I was rather expecting some suggestions for improvements Dusting was quite sufficient. You probably can't "hear" it, but this critter exudes character. Give it a cigar, and move on, John...  |
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« Reply #4 on: September 05, 2009, 01:18:26 PM » |
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I found this very refreshing. I liked those synth horns and I believe a more realistic horn section would detract from the song IMO. I also liked your transitions and soundscapes. I was rather expecting some suggestions for improvements My suggestion is don’t change a thing. |
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« Reply #5 on: September 05, 2009, 10:06:49 PM » |
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Well I guess that's it then. It stays as it is.
Thanks for your comments guys, and I'm very pleased you like it.
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« Reply #6 on: September 05, 2009, 10:22:24 PM » |
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I don't know how songs get snuck in without showing up under "new posts"?? ..but better late than never, I guess..this is lovely. It has your signature sound, and I can't imagine anything you might do that would improve it. I love the horns just the way they are..a LOT. That's such a beautiful sound.  Wyatt |
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« Reply #7 on: September 06, 2009, 08:14:22 PM » |
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Thanks mate. Appreciate your comments. Incidentally. I sometimes find new entries don't seem to get marked. I've always thought it was just me fumbling about |
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« Reply #8 on: September 06, 2009, 09:53:37 PM » |
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Thanks mate. Appreciate your comments. Incidentally. I sometimes find new entries don't seem to get marked. I've always thought it was just me fumbling about ..it's not just you..I've been missing stuff since time began.  |
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« Reply #9 on: September 07, 2009, 07:16:03 AM » |
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Sounds like a fairy-tail  Now I have a tiny-litle problem with it.... that EP playing sounds rather stiff ? If I didn't know you I would think that it was sequenced, since I know that it is played, I would suspect that you didn't do any warming-up before playing this ? k |
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« Reply #10 on: September 07, 2009, 08:26:34 PM » |
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Thanks for listening Rony. You know you've brought up a point I've never noticed before  and you are quite right. It does sound a little rigid. I think I might have a go at playing just that part again to see if I can do better. |
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