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Title: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: advaya on April 11, 2007, 06:44:01 PM
 :D <-- coolest smiley ever!

 >:( <-- grrrr!

PS: Thanks to the admins for letting me host my track here for the KVR compo. Appreciated!

Cheers.


Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: kara on April 11, 2007, 06:52:56 PM
Cool melodic song, I enjoyed listening to it

Good luck with the contest

Kara


Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: jura on April 11, 2007, 07:07:00 PM
Such a peace-full gentle sounding mood. Hmmm....


Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: Laguna Rising on April 11, 2007, 09:56:40 PM
Hi Advaya
Nice melodies here. Many good variations and wise arrangement.
I like the arpeggiated melodic intro very much

Cheers


Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: birdbrain on April 12, 2007, 05:11:46 AM
i really like that miniscule silence at 44 seconds.  really breaks up the two sides nicely.  both sides  equally beautiful. 


Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: advaya on April 12, 2007, 08:36:31 AM
Hey! This is cool. I wasn't expecting any feedback @ this forum, but it's always nice to see replies.

Thanks for the comments on the track. I appreciate it... I like these KVR compos, as the 2-min rule forces me to learn new ways to transition phrases together, and keep my ideas from becoming too long-winded... Something I'm usually guilty of.

@ KM: Your music forum here is well done. I'll be sure to come and hang out here more often. :D

Cheers everyone.


Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: kara on April 12, 2007, 09:27:41 AM
One of the rules of the forum; everybody gets feedback on there song :)

...I wasn't expecting any feedback @ this forum, but it's always nice to see replies.




Title: Re: Get off the Road -- KVR compo (apr 07)
Post by: Frederik on April 12, 2007, 08:00:06 PM
Nice melodical song indeed.
well composed and arranged...

The only remark is that it all sounds a bit... flat, at least to me. I could do with some more punch on the drums, and the lead could get a bit nastier or dirtier (in places).
Just some quick thoughts of mine ;-)

bye,

frederik