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Title: My song-in-progress Post by: NeoN on September 11, 2011, 05:37:00 PM Hey guys,
Here's a little expansion on the main track. I decided to make this song more Piano-oriented. Added Harps, Marcato and a new Piano part for the Chorus. Hope you guys like this...... Peter New version right here: Title: Re: My little demo Post by: folderol on September 11, 2011, 05:53:28 PM Very good start. Has lots of possibilities.
Title: Re: My little demo Post by: elwoodblues1969 on September 11, 2011, 06:16:27 PM Very good start. Has lots of possibilities. Agreed. 8) -Thom Title: Re: My little demo Post by: Azell on September 11, 2011, 06:39:13 PM très bon début, combien de temps pour la suite?? :D :D
Title: Re: My little demo Post by: Oren on September 11, 2011, 09:40:23 PM ...here's my demo of what I'm working on for the album... Probably the nicest storm I've ever heard... ;DTitle: Re: My little demo Post by: MarioD on September 12, 2011, 11:56:48 PM Very good start. Has lots of possibilities. Agreed. 8) -Thom A BIG +1 Title: Re: My little demo Post by: NeoN on September 13, 2011, 08:34:10 AM Thanks guys.
I'll try to make this sound good in the end....! :) Title: Re: My little demo Post by: magmavander on September 16, 2011, 07:31:24 PM oh yes! Very good start. A charming main theme :;
Something that makes you feel happy and dreamy. Thanks!! Title: Re: My little demo Post by: NeoN on September 18, 2011, 06:33:38 PM Magma,
merci pour vos bons mots!! I hope this sounded right ;D Check out my new version........ ;) Title: Re: My little demo - new version ;) Post by: elwoodblues1969 on September 18, 2011, 07:11:46 PM By eliminating the original version,there's no basis for comparison and since I don't recall the original in detail,I really don't have an opinion to offer....sorry.
-Thom Title: Re: My little demo - new version ;) Post by: folderol on September 18, 2011, 08:42:06 PM Unfortunately I lost the copy I had of the original (I usually keep just about everything) so, like Thom, find it a bit difficult to remember what it was like. This sounds improved from what I remember, with a greater variation of instruments.
The end seems rather abrupt so I do hope you'll continue to develop this and round it off nicely. Title: Re: My little demo - new version ;) Post by: NeoN on September 18, 2011, 09:21:43 PM Sorry guys!
I will re-upload the 1st version tomorrow. Thanks! Old version uploaded Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: Azell on September 27, 2011, 07:24:40 PM j'attends toujours la suite :D
:-* Azell Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: NeoN on September 28, 2011, 07:29:06 AM Thanks Azell!
This is still work-in-progress..... :) Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: elwoodblues1969 on October 02, 2011, 02:32:35 AM A notable improvement over the previous version,but the heavy metal style guitar seems very out of place,especially so,without a bass-line.
-Thom Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: NeoN on October 05, 2011, 09:31:54 AM Thanks Thom ;)
I might consider softening the guitar a little bit. Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: Oren on October 10, 2011, 09:03:23 PM I like the piano and big orchestral sound :; This is something Kara would enjoy, but the style is still very accessible to the average listener.
Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: offthewall on October 11, 2011, 02:09:14 PM 8)
Watching with interest for further developments, Peter 8) ;) James Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: magmavander on October 12, 2011, 08:12:58 PM Excellent development :) Sounds really good about melody's work.
Sounds a bit too 'bright' in EQ, but this is my taste. Needs a bass foundation also I think. I have tried a few second another general EQ. I started by lowering 31 Hz a little bit, pushing up 60/62 Hz to a high level. Lowered a little 500 Hz, triple more at 1KHz. It's just a start ;D Waiting for next version 8) Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: NeoN on October 13, 2011, 06:51:13 PM Merci Magmavander! :)
I will definitely add a bassline, no doubt about it. Thanks a lot for your suggestions on the EQ man. I'm really sorry I haven't found time to work on the song yet guys, it seems I'm a little too busy these days. Do we have a deadline? I really want this to sound perfect and I hope it will in the end, but if you feel I am holding back the whole project just go on without my song. I'd be happy even if this became an extra download or something. Peter Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: NeoN on October 13, 2011, 06:59:57 PM 8) Watching with interest for further developments, Peter 8) ;) James Thank you very much James :) Stay tuned for updated versions! Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: Azell on October 13, 2011, 08:49:15 PM I found this composition very well, but just a little too short. 1 or 2 additional minutes would be very nice. I love the passage of the violins. Good progress, just continue a little
:- :- Azell Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: Marc JX8P on October 28, 2011, 09:28:13 AM Very nice, wonderful piano playing! I would recommend breaking up the chord progression at some point though with some different chords, just to have a little break, and maybe also vary the drums a bit - have a fill here and there. Sounds really great though!
Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: NeoN on October 28, 2011, 07:23:34 PM Thank you Marc, I agree about the piano and I may do some more different chords. Not sure though.
The song is going very well so far ;) Title: Re: My song-in-progress Post by: Oren on June 29, 2012, 03:20:50 AM Peter,
Version 2 is great! In my opinion, a finished song - unless you want to make it a little longer... What's the plan, Dude? ;D |