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Music Auditorium => Pop,Jazz,Rock,Easy Listening => Topic started by: elwoodblues91 on January 28, 2016, 02:53:39 AM



Title: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: elwoodblues91 on January 28, 2016, 02:53:39 AM
Thanks to my lovely girl,I don't think I will ever run out of inspiration for writing music! (http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-love010.gif) (http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys.php)


Title: Re: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: folderol on January 28, 2016, 10:09:39 PM
I think this has just reached a chillout factor of 11 ;D Novel idea to use that chip-type sound in the middle. Lovely finish.
Definitely a keeper 8)


Title: Re: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: elwoodblues91 on January 28, 2016, 11:22:27 PM
I think this has just reached a chillout factor of 11 ;D Novel idea to use that chip-type sound in the middle. Lovely finish.
Definitely a keeper 8)

Thanks for the very kind feedback Will!I think this is the most expeditious tune I've ever created,as from conception to finish,took me only two hours to complete.Inspiration is everything & I'm so grateful to have such a wonderful source of inspiration(as I'm the musician and she's my muse!) (http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-love013.gif) (http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys.php)


Title: Re: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: MarioD on January 29, 2016, 01:40:45 PM
Although I am getting tired of saying this but I think this is your best to date.  Everything about this is spot on and your instrumentation put it over the top IMHO.

Agree with Will in that this is a keeper for sure!


Title: Re: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: elwoodblues91 on January 29, 2016, 01:54:14 PM
Although I am getting tired of saying this but I think this is your best to date.  Everything about this is spot on and your instrumentation put it over the top IMHO.

Agree with Will in that this is a keeper for sure!

Despite you becoming tired of your particular commentary,reading your feedback never gets old...as I really appreciate it! ;D Thank you for your generous accolades! :D I suppose my tune is spot on,because for once,my life is spot on!


Title: Re: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: offthewall on January 30, 2016, 11:10:26 AM
Most excellent work Thom.
Glad you now have your muse.
Although these are not the sort of sounds that I find appealing (personally) this is a superb composition and so well executed.
What I particularly like is that motif at the start, which recurs later on, with the bass and lead parts playing cross-rhythms. That, to me, is the icing on the cake.

 ;)
James.


Title: Re: Sweet Oasis(NZ)
Post by: elwoodblues91 on January 30, 2016, 07:32:13 PM
Most excellent work Thom.
Glad you now have your muse.
Although these are not the sort of sounds that I find appealing (personally) this is a superb composition and so well executed.
What I particularly like is that motif at the start, which recurs later on, with the bass and lead parts playing cross-rhythms. That, to me, is the icing on the cake.

 ;)
James.

Thank you for your exceedingly kind comments James! :-*