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Title: Hollow Sun (Kompoz song) Post by: NeoN on September 18, 2017, 03:54:06 PM Here's another slower-paced song of mine called Hollow Sun.
The truth is, I never experimented with this rhythm before but I am starting to like it. Hollow Sun Music & Composition: NeoN Solo Guitars: JonA33 Bass & Vox: GeorgeSC Lyrics: BKWilliamson My life's an open book Pages in the wind Pictures clear as daylight Still burning in my mind Knowing you could always Read between the lines Screaming in the darkness Outside an open door Voices of the heartless Crying out for more Chorus I used to believe the sun Would shine again But it's a Hollow sun You know my friend ------------------- So many voices Locked inside my head Swallowed by the silence Is my only defence It changes with the seasons From grey to black Looking for the reasons Falling into the cracks My tears are in the past Now I'm just walking On broken glass With a Hollow sun Enjoy! Peter Title: Re: Hollow Sun (Kompoz Song) Post by: folderol on September 18, 2017, 05:12:06 PM Very VERY impressed with this.
It has tantalising 'flavours' of some classic late '60s to early '70s groups. Title: Re: Hollow Sun (Kompoz Song) Post by: MarioD on September 22, 2017, 11:05:37 PM Very VERY impressed with this. It has tantalising 'flavours' of some classic late '60s to early '70s groups. I agree with Will. I think this is fantastic :; Great vocal, backing tracks, and an outstanding guitar lead :; Note there is a lot of dead space at the end of the song. You may want to cut that out. |