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Title: October Daydream Post by: MarioD on October 12, 2018, 03:09:34 PM You are laying under an old Maple tree during the autumn season. Leaves of various shades of red, yellow, purple, black, orange, pink, magenta, blue, and brown are gently falling to the ground. Your mind is drifting in many directions as you are experiencing an October Daydream.
JonD is playing one of the choirs and the lead via his keyboard controller. I am playing the strings with my keyboard controller and Band-in-a-Box is playing the rest of the tracks. Title: Re: October Daydream Post by: folderol on October 12, 2018, 03:49:44 PM Very nice chill-out track.
One small suggestion would be to use a slightly 'harder' sound for the lead, to bring it forward in the mix. Title: Re: October Daydream Post by: bvdp on October 12, 2018, 06:14:14 PM Cool.
I'll agree with folderol about bringing up the lead. You could use a 'harder' sound or do some creative panning with the accomp. off to the sides and the lead in the center. A bit more dynamic changes in the lead would help as well. But, even without that, it's a nice piece. Thanks for sharing! Title: Re: October Daydream Post by: MarioD on October 13, 2018, 10:51:38 PM Thanx guys for listening and the suggestions. Food for thought for sure.
Title: Re: October Daydream Post by: elwoodblues91 on October 14, 2018, 09:55:11 PM Pretty composition...nice choir sound.Very dry sounding though.Seems to have no effects...sounds like a mono track,actually.
Title: Re: October Daydream Post by: MarioD on October 16, 2018, 12:54:36 AM Thom, I hear a touch of reverb and there is a stereo spread here. One chorus and the strings are on the left, the second chorus is on the right with the balance of the instruments near the center, i.e. drums, keys, bass, and Jon's lead.
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