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Author Topic: White Squall(Awash At Sea)  (Read 2007 times)
elwoodblues91
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« on: July 08, 2022, 02:10:58 AM »

Earth is firm under my feet....road rises up to the vantage point in the street
The sky's breath at my back....the trails diverge on the path(so it says, on the map)
The sun breaks through the trees, the sea just beyond the breach
The edge of the earth, in all of it's girth....must take that intrepid step...until I'm immersed
Bound for no ports, pushing forth...but what do I see, coming down...from the north?
Ominous clouds, descending down...surrounding my vessel in a charcoal shroud
The impotence & flaccidness of nocturnal dreams, in an empty world I let out my screams
An elemental force, rushing forth...on it's course
Nothing to reach out to, no one to call...as I sail head-long into the great white squall...

https://soundcloud.com/thomas-sneddon-164251475/white-squallawash-at-sea?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
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MarioD
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« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2022, 09:45:07 PM »

WOW Thom, you have a fantastic voice!

Outstanding vocal and lyrics

Your sounds fit your vocal perfectly

Loved the change around the 3:00 mark

One of if not your best to date

Loved it.
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elwoodblues91
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« Reply #2 on: July 10, 2022, 01:50:52 AM »

Appreciate the very kind accolades, my friend!  Kiss I had a blast working on this song(though I was nervous about adding vocals, as I have not sang in a long while!)
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« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2022, 12:39:23 PM »

Very evocative song. Nice touch changing the style and meter of the song to match the subject.
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« Reply #4 on: July 12, 2022, 06:32:23 PM »

Thanks for the kind words, Will. Smiley
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