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CypherOne
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« on: September 21, 2007, 02:23:56 PM »

Hi guys, been a while etc etc..

http://virb.com/cypherone

not really finished but as close as I get these days...

I'm not completely happy with the snare but overall I'm fairly happy.

Thanks to anyone that listens Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2007, 06:38:12 PM »

Just had a quick listen. It certainly comes in with a bang.

What's your target audience? Dance?

As a tune, in any other context I don't think it really develops enough.

... others may not agree of course!
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« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2007, 07:05:16 PM »

um, yeah dance, I hoped that was obvious.  That's not all that I write, just the mood that took me today (this is just a quick sketch to pass a couple of hours today).

thanks for listening Smiley  I do appreciate the feedback, and actually agree with you - to be honest time is very limited for me so I rarely get the chance to revisit my tracks
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« Reply #3 on: September 29, 2007, 09:26:26 AM »

Hi CypherOne
This sounds good and I think the production is very well refined, sounds above the average track
I like the agressive character, the variations in melodies, the breathing moments, why aren't you happy with the snare ? oh, probably you'd like it more punchy

Cheers
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« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2007, 10:35:07 AM »

cheers LR Smiley

I'm not sure why I'm not happy with the snare - in fact, I've got used to it now so it'll stay as it is.  I'm never happy with my snares...
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« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2007, 11:10:53 AM »

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I'm never happy with my snares...


LOL Grin OK, I'm also allergic to revisiting or reworking my tracks once mastered... Smiley
 
 
 
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« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2007, 10:29:44 PM »

Although i'm noyt really into the out and out dance side of electronica, i liked the energy of this track and the combination of sounds. This had me bobbing my head as i was listening anyway. Great punchy production that this type of track needs and i liked the snare, thought it fitted well. good one.  Cool
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