New uptempo track: Calender Girl

[Frederik]

It's been quite some time, hope you all are doing fine 

I'll make my re-entrance with some new uptempo thing. Kept it pretty simple: only guitars, bass, dums and vocals.

All comments and suggestions welcome!

frederik

[kara]

A nice pop song.
At the start the vox could be a tad more upfront.
Listening to the whole song, I would say that the voice could use some Eq so that it stands out a bit more in the song.

k

[folderol]

Very much agree with Rony here, but I wonder if it would help to sharpen up just the lead 'singer' and leave the harmonies as they are.

I found when trying to sing, that I was a bit hesitant on the start each time, so developed the idea of have a short warm-up intro to sing any old rubbish over (which was of course not recorded. I wonder if the same trick might help you too?

Nice pop song anyway.

[Laguna Rising]

Cool stuff Frederik, this is a very nice composition and sounds good indeed.
I love the vocal lines, and although you said you kept it simple (arrangement wise) it is NOT empty at all
Well done

Cheers

[Frederik]

Thanks for your kind word and usefull suggestions.

Yes, when I say I keep it pretty simple I mean I don't throw in piano's, hammonds, strings etc

fredereik

[MarioD]

Super song Frederik!  Very nice backing tracks.

I do agree with Rony in that the vox should be more out front.

“Guitars, bass and drums, what more could you ask for” says a guitar/bass player!

[Frederik]

Thanks Mario!

I'll lift the vocals a bit, seems that everybody agrees they're not loud or up-front enough.

frederik