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blipp
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« on: March 20, 2009, 11:16:19 PM »

Hope you enjoy. Thanks  Afro

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Laguna Rising
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« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 09:05:19 AM »

Dreaming atmosphere, it sounds like the sun is melting the mist.
I like this kind of arpeggiated theme. It develops very well with different dynamics.
Changing sounds and arrangement make it work great, without being repetitive.

Cheers
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Wyatt
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« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 12:18:03 PM »

Pretty like drops of light.

Nice song!

Cool

Wyatt
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« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 12:45:05 PM »

Blipp,

The song becomes very interesting for me starting at 1:25,as the bass line is the strongest element in this piece. Cool
As much as I like this bass line though,I think that-because of the length of the song,there should be a break in this section...such as some chord progressions for about 8 measures.
The variations with the drum track are very good & the change in the synth lead sound at 2:29 was a great move as well,but I think the song would be more well rounded with a break in it somewhere.

It's just my thoughts,so I hope you don't mind my input...it's just the layout that I hear in my head when I listen to this piece.

It's really an evocative soundscape & superbly creative. Afro

-Thom
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blipp
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« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2009, 01:00:32 PM »

Thanks guys.  Smiley

No Thom i don't mind at all, in fact i welcome any constructive criticism, it's one of the many ways we can all learn things about our music that we don't see our selves.  Smiley

This track is a few months old, in fact i have quite a few elecrtonica tracks i've done over the past few months that i hav'nt posted here and i'll be uploading a few here over the coming weeks, so here's hoping you don't get sick of me.  Grin
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« Reply #5 on: May 11, 2011, 11:18:08 AM »

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