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« on: March 12, 2007, 07:35:46 PM » |
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Here's a track I wrote at a Time when I was akind of sad or desperate I can say....  I'm working on lyrics and Vocals melody as it is akind of difficult song to write lyrics for.... Tell me how you like it! (or not)  NeoN (Whisper from the Auditorium) |
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« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2007, 07:51:28 PM » |
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Hi Neon, I absolutely love this one !!! Really fabulous. I don't think it is a sad song. Were I come from they call this emo-pop and most of the time a deep vocal voice start the songs and than goes up all the way. Don't know if you know but I mean but I'm think I'm referring to the style like Bono did in some of his songs (e.g. With or without you). Still, this is the kind of music that make you hair raise on your arms. Love to hear the version with the vocal. And should you leave it like this, it could even become a theme song for a movie. Absolutely a great piece !
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NeoN
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« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2007, 08:11:29 PM » |
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Thank you so much Moon..  Inspiring Words to me.. I'm happy to hear that the first person who listened to this (after me) liked it! Let's see how this piece will turn out in the end...  |
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« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2007, 08:51:57 PM » |
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Hmmm, I can't open it...
My Windows Media Player didnt recognize it. I'm under XP Pro.
Sorry...
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« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2007, 09:01:57 PM » |
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Sounds promising NeoN. Real Eighties feel to it. Like it.
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« Reply #5 on: March 13, 2007, 06:40:51 AM » |
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Hmmm, I can't open it...
My Windows Media Player didnt recognize it. I'm under XP Pro.
Sorry...
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But why? I can open it with no problem.... Maybe check the option of which files can be played in your Windows Media Player! Hope I helped.. |
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« Reply #6 on: March 13, 2007, 10:17:14 AM » |
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Lovely combination between the guitar and the piano, light and they complement each other. You are absolute right, it is a great ballad which would be wonderfull with vocals on it. Writing text for a song is not an easy thing, I struggle with the same problem. But who knows, one we have more members here, somebody will be happy to collaborate with you Kara |
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« Reply #7 on: March 13, 2007, 11:48:01 AM » |
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Thank you Kara Nice to hear these good words... NeoN |
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« Reply #8 on: March 19, 2007, 02:44:16 PM » |
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This is very good. i loved the guitar arp, reminded me of the cocteau twins a bit, but without the heavy effects. The arrangement is well put together and it will sound even better with vocals. I played along to this with my own guitar. Good work.
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NeoN
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« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2007, 08:00:29 PM » |
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Hi blipp, great to see you here Thanx for the comments and for playing my song on your Guitar! I'ts a kind of difficult for me to find some lyrics for this song though.... See you.. NeoN (whisper from the old auditorium...) |
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« Reply #10 on: March 21, 2007, 07:14:37 PM » |
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Yeah, this is real nice, Neon (aka Whisper). Lovely vibe. I'ts a kind of difficult for me to find some lyrics for this song though....
Just let the song and the emotion sit in your head awhile, I'm sure the words will come along. |
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« Reply #11 on: March 21, 2007, 11:17:25 PM » |
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Hi there, NeoN, I just been listening to this beautiful tune of yours. It really doesn't need words, if you can't find them....the tune speaks for itself! I don't know if your familiar with my own music (see 'artist page' here on Kara-Moon), but I am well into traditional folk music with 'real' instruments. I would really love to try putting a (irish style) whistle to this tune, if you would let me? |
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« Reply #12 on: March 22, 2007, 08:36:06 AM » |
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Thanx Guys...
Hey offthewall, try it, I'm curius to see how it will sound like!
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« Reply #13 on: March 22, 2007, 07:54:48 PM » |
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Hi there, NeoN, I just been listening to this beautiful tune of yours. It really doesn't need words, if you can't find them....the tune speaks for itself! I don't know if your familiar with my own music (see 'artist page' here on Kara-Moon), but I am well into traditional folk music with 'real' instruments. I would really love to try putting a (irish style) whistle to this tune, if you would let me? OK, I'm really waiting to see how this will sounds like cause this song has something very magical. The whistle sounds like a great idea. Looking forward... |
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« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2007, 11:14:19 PM » |
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 Great fun...... I'll see what I can do over the weekend.
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