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isle3music
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« on: July 26, 2010, 03:26:21 AM »

This is a song I just put together in a couple of hours.Like I mentioned in my previous post,I came across some sounds when I was working on the song Shadows that I didn't use,so I kept them in a folder and went back today and just put them together.I don't think it's scary but with me you just never know...
I hope you like it
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« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2010, 12:06:00 PM »

Another excellent, but a tad short, composition.

You have this genre down perfectly.  This is really good work.

You may want to extend it a bit, but even if you don’t this as well, as your other compositions, are in my keeper folder.
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« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2010, 06:34:11 PM »

you're a bit too good at this, stop it!!   Evil Evil

Like mario said, would be nice being longer.  Where the reverse cymbal comes in, I can imagine the song really taking off there.

Where do you get your vocal samples? you use some superb ones.
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« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2010, 10:35:20 PM »

you're a bit too good at this, stop it!!   Evil Evil

Like mario said, would be nice being longer.  Where the reverse cymbal comes in, I can imagine the song really taking off there.

Where do you get your vocal samples? you use some superb ones.
You're too kind...
It is kind of short as are most of my songs because it's not easy to keep the listener interested in an instrumental song for more than a minute or two.
Having said that,I think out of all my songs,this one can get away with being "short" because once the vocals about her brown eyes are done,the song is basically done,going longer would mean he would have to say more things and I haven't found that vocal part yet....I suppose I could make it longer somehow...oh boy here we go again Undecided
The male vocals are from freesound.org and the singing female vocals are from BelaD Diva Revamp
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Rui
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« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2010, 06:29:01 PM »

Wow!

Hey, Paul. You're right - we need to slow this guy down Evil
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« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 11:48:28 PM »

Wow!
Hey, Paul. You're right - we need to slow this guy down Evil
OK,very funny... Evil
Thanks for listening and the comments
Rui
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« Reply #6 on: August 01, 2010, 08:44:40 PM »

 Shocked
If you ever have the urge to remake this one I would happily contribute.

The main theme is absolutely superb.  If you want to get rid of the 'bought in' vocals and come up with a set of dark lyrics I would love to have a go, along with some guitar.
 Cool Food for thought, my friend ....  Roll Eyes   get composing  Evil

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« Reply #7 on: August 01, 2010, 09:13:23 PM »

Shocked
If you ever have the urge to remake this one I would happily contribute.
The main theme is absolutely superb.  If you want to get rid of the 'bought in' vocals and come up with a set of dark lyrics I would love to have a go, along with some guitar.
 Cool Food for thought, my friend ....  Roll Eyes   get composing  Evil
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James
Dark lyrics,hmm...verry interresting....
I'm currently working with someone on this just trying to make it longer,I don't know how it will turn out but I'm always interested in lyrics for my songs
Thanks for the compliments on both songs,James
Rui
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« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2010, 05:51:42 PM »

Hey, Paul. You're right - we need to slow this guy down Evil
No question - you got skills, man...

Keep it up!
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« Reply #9 on: October 25, 2010, 06:47:48 AM »

I like what I hear, looking forward to the extended version.

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