not o'clock tonight

[mister natural]

http://misternatural.bandcamp.com/

[folderol]

Hi, and welcome here.

I quite liked your track, although i would say it's a bit over 'bright' to be truly an ambient piece - but them that's just my personal opinion. Also, I was a little disappointed that it just rapidly faded out, giving it an unfinished feeling.

Incidentally, did you know you can place tracks directly on this site.

[Oren]

I quite liked your track, although i would say it's a bit over 'bright' to be truly an ambient piece
Incidentally, did you know you can place tracks directly on this site.

Nice! For me, the ambient thing started about 1min. 10sec.
That guitar action has real potential, and deserves to be developed more...

[mister natural]

respect

I kept the recording at a strict 3min as I submitted the track to KVR's Jan contest & Mr Scoops is a Nazi about the timing.
The finished track develops a bit more with more whacked-out guitar lines & doesn't hack out like the current bandcamp track does. I'll re-upload to BC next month

thanks for your feedback

[MarioD]

I’m glad you’re going to rework this one, maybe just extend it a little to give it a proper ending.  I like your guitar work.  I wouldn’t get too whacked-out on the guitar lines.  Maybe a mellower tone with more reverb and delay would be more appropriate for this style?  Just my opinion.

This has a ton of potential.