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« on: March 07, 2013, 09:25:30 PM »

Hey folks.

At the beginning of this year I determined to embark on a project which has been close to my heart for some time now.
This was to get my lovely wife back into singing after far too many years away from it. You may recall that I did manage to persuade her, a couple of times, into songs a few years back. One of the biggest problems that I have had has been finding 'the right songs' for her. She claims that (quite rightly) I tend to compose to suit my own style and limitations. In other words there is no way that I can write a song to suit her individual voice and style.
So ...
having recently found a lyrics writer, who claims to be able to write any song in any style to any brief, and a recently retired opera singer who wants to make his mark as a musical composer but is naturally drawn towards the world of folk music ...
I realised that this could be the combination I was waiting for.
I contacted them both and gave an invitation, and an outline of what was needed, to participate in this project.
To that end Kevin Skiles composed a melody with guitar accompaniment which I presented to my good lady for her approval. Once that was accepted, as a possibility, I sent this with a request for an adaptation of a favourite poem (by John Keats) to Joel Sattler who duly came up with the goods.

Sorry for the long story but it is quite crucial in explanation of this (in my world) mile-stone event.
We managed to produce a very stripped down acoustic rendition of this song.
Isabella.
Based on the poem of Isabella, or The Pot of Basil. An epic poem but also is represented by one of our favourite paintings (which we often visit in out local gallery).
Myself on solo acoustic guitar and my LadyD with her beautiful voice. Nothing else, other than production.

Fair Isabella loved a lad wrong for her
Her brothers' vassal, a common labourer
Lorenzo had a love so pure   
Such burning heat could scarce endure 
Each day their love it grew more sure
A malady with no cure

The brothers thought he's nothing more than a slave
Barely deserving of the place that they gave
They conspired, they would take his life
She would never be his wife

They led him to the wood and laid him down
Told Isabella he could not be found
Taken a ship for foreign lands   
To wander alone on distant sands 
Thinking they were free, ‘twas not to be
They had joined the damned

The brothers thought he's nothing more than a slave
Barely deserving of the place that they gave
They conspired, then they took his life
She would never be his wife

Lorenzo came to Isabella in a dream
Said in the forest I am buried by a stream
Said come and find me where I'm dead   
Don't be afraid that's what he said     
She found the body and there she took his head
Placed it in a pot instead

The brothers thought he's nothing more than a slave
Barely deserving of the place that they gave
They conspired, and then took his life
She would never be his wife

She filled the pot with basil at the top
Watered it with tears, would leave it not
The brothers watched her as she pined   
Stole the vase only to find   
The sight within, it horrified
Triumph within them, it died.

The brothers thought he's nothing more than a slave
Barely deserving of the place that they gave
They conspired, and then took his life
She would never be his wife
 
Grieving Isabella, sad on vast estate
No love, no family, all to do was wait
Wait for the hour of her death
The last long drawing of her breath

The moment that her life at last would end
To be with her Lorenzo once again....
They conspired, but they took her life
She will never be his wife.


The journey should continue as I am already starting work on the follow up.  Cheesy

 Wink
James

 

* Isabella (feat LadyD).mp3 (7698 KB - downloaded 309 times.)

* Isabella.jpg (118.61 KB, 633x633 - viewed 535 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2013, 07:11:23 PM »

Wow! This is a collaboration with a difference! The transition from poem to song is absolutely faultless

You can all be extremely proud of this beautiful creation... And the singing. Words fail me Afro
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« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2013, 08:14:51 PM »

 Lips Sealed
Thank you so much.
The one thing I can be sure about with K-M is that the criticism is always brutally honest.
It's one of the things that still keeps the place at the top of the tree.  wOO
Thanks again .... this one is really important to me.

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James
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« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2013, 02:34:59 AM »

Lovely ax picking & vocals!The mix has a lot of ambiance & atmosphere...quite an enjoyable coffeehouse-style recording.
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« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2013, 01:07:02 PM »

Crystal clear guitar sound with a poetic voice that sounds like an angel. Great lyrics. Style of the song is exactly in line with the mix. Indeed the right atmosphere and ambiance. This is without any doubt a professional production! In one word, it's perfect!
This one is a masterpiece. A great production by people who are blessed with a high dose talent ! 

Hounestly, you keep amazing me, pushing the standards of your music higher and higher. You're amongst the stars my friend!

Moon

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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2013, 07:53:24 PM »

Bravo à LadyD, c'est frais, agréable, juste une très jolie voix très claire. J'adore ++++
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« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2013, 09:26:24 PM »

Thank you,
Thom, Francis, Pierrette.

Your commendations mean a lot to me.
I am desperately trying to get my lady to regain her confidence in order to continue.
It ain't easy  Lips Sealed

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James
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« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2013, 11:12:35 PM »

... a lot of ambiance & atmosphere ... an enjoyable coffeehouse-style recording...

Enchanting!
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« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2013, 09:57:19 PM »

I didn't know Isabella was your wife! Gosh, I love this song! I like this type of composition.
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« Reply #9 on: April 23, 2013, 10:00:55 PM »

Thanks Larry.
My wife isn't Isabella ... that's the song ... but it is her singing.

The follow-up is almost ready. I'm just waiting for one player to finish his part then I can show it off.
It's different again ....

..... watch this space  Cool Cool

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« Reply #10 on: April 23, 2013, 10:31:19 PM »

Like Oren commented, enchanting! I'll be anxious to hear the follow-up
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« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2013, 07:19:12 PM »

Lovely ax picking & vocals!The mix has a lot of ambiance & atmosphere...quite an enjoyable coffeehouse-style recording.

A BIG +1

This is a masterpiece!

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