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MarioD
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« on: May 31, 2017, 12:28:41 AM »

We all dread, but most of us have gotten, the call where a loved one has passed.  We are sad at first but then realize they were a good person and are going to someplace better.  That is what we were trying to capture in this song.

We hope you like it.

* The Call.mp3 (6415.15 KB - downloaded 246 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2017, 02:24:03 AM »

This is a nice piece. Thanks for sharing.

Only 2 comments I'd make about it, other than "outstanding job" are:

   - I think it was a tad too long. But, that might just be my increasingly short attentions span.

   - There was some quivering (modulation) about 3 minutes in. I suspect you were playing with a tremolo knob or pitch bend. To me, it sounded "off". Not terribly so ... but you did want comments Smiley

Again, nice.
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« Reply #2 on: May 31, 2017, 02:45:56 PM »

bvdp thanx for listening and commenting.

I was worried that it was too long. JonD liked it as is so that is how it was posted.

I'll check into the quivering.  I did not do any vibrato or tremolo in this song.  All articulations other than volume are embedded in the samples that I used.

Thanx again for the comments.
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« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2017, 04:59:31 PM »

Could have been a slightly off tuning issue ... you know, when 2 strings/voices are slightly off they warble on the same note. Or (could it be true!) it might just be my ears Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2017, 08:27:28 AM »

A simple but very restful tune. Thanks for sharing.
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