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« on: September 04, 2007, 10:55:51 PM » |
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 When I saw the theme I thought…….can’t sing, write unintelligible lyrics, strum guitar badly……..who on earth can I hope to emulate?? So here is my take on Dylan! The Ghost Of Caviar.   James
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bada-pisch!
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« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2007, 11:36:05 PM » |
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hehe  > that worked out quite nice actually  well done |
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« Reply #2 on: September 05, 2007, 07:12:23 AM » |
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Hi James,
This is a great entry, it definitifly sounds like Dylan
Good work, good luck with the contest
k
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« Reply #3 on: September 05, 2007, 04:00:20 PM » |
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Pretty close to the mark, but don't you think you're singing a bit too much ON key  |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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« Reply #4 on: September 05, 2007, 08:21:53 PM » |
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Offthewall, This is a flawless replica of Dylan's sound & style,but you should include written lyrics with it,as I barely understood a word. Very impressive stuff.  Elwood |
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« Reply #5 on: September 05, 2007, 09:35:22 PM » |
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 but you should include written lyrics with it The Ghost of Caviar (?)
Well he walked across the ocean
And he jumped from rock to tree
And he tumbled on the highways
And lived on honey bees
He looked a lot like poison
Drained from a desert rat
I thought I saw his wizened face
Beneath the crooked hat
He knows what we all are
The ghost of Caviar
We watch him leap from buildings
A comet flashes by
The hundred thousand creatures bow
Before his baleful eye
He knows what we all are
The ghost of Caviar
The crocodile lies waiting
On a rusty railroad track
The pirate flag flies overhead
The ghost is coming back…..
 James
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« Reply #6 on: September 06, 2007, 09:35:50 PM » |
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Pretty close to the mark, but don't you think you're singing a bit too much ON key Very good track, and excellent vocal performance. I like it. I like the lyrics, too This month seems hard to come up with something good... (it's hard to choose...  ) Cheers |
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« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2007, 10:30:34 PM » |
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Trying to do sensible reviews is even harder  |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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« Reply #8 on: September 27, 2007, 06:28:11 PM » |
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Hey James,
You did a great job on that..cool.
Guitar style, lyrics, and vocals..they all do it for me.
I got a kick out of that one.
Wyatt
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« Reply #9 on: September 27, 2007, 09:41:20 PM » |
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Thanks Wyatt. I had fun with this one! The votes are starting to come in now and I already have three #2's Shocks all round! James |
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« Reply #10 on: September 27, 2007, 11:27:08 PM » |
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Cool Congrats, Man!!
Way to go!!
Wyatt
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« Reply #11 on: September 28, 2007, 06:57:18 AM » |
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Great James
This song deserves votes !
k
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« Reply #12 on: October 01, 2007, 12:12:16 PM » |
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You just made it in the top 10 Congratz man, well done k |
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« Reply #13 on: October 01, 2007, 12:24:59 PM » |
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Cool Congrats, Man!!
Way to go!!
[got my vote]
Wyatt
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« Reply #14 on: October 01, 2007, 08:09:03 PM » |
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Yep. t' boy dun well |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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