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« Reply #30 on: September 17, 2007, 10:02:30 PM »

Will,
I'm just listening again as I read your comments and can see what you mean.
However....this was intentional, as a sort of 'echo' style to attempt to supplement the main instrument without detracting from it, if you understand.  Undecided
This is why I would like to have an extended version.
My opinion (FWIW) is that a musical theme should be allowed to develop so the listener recognises the structure......then let that structure support a bit of 'interpretation'. If the interpretation is applied before the poor listener has 'got his lugs in' (as they say in my part of the world), it usually makes a mess of the main theme.  Lips Sealed

Anyway, I enjoyed doing this and would like to take it further. (by the way, I quite like the 'clarinet')
At this point I can hear just the whole repeated.....unless you can come up with a suitable variation....maybe a longish bridge section then finish with V3 and V4.

Thank you for your music.....it's lovely!
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« Reply #31 on: September 19, 2007, 07:05:18 PM »

Ok, I broadly agree with what you are saying here.

What I'm thinking now is to add a bridging section as you suggest, but making it perform a key change too (probably up a 4th) to a final repeat of V3 & V4.

How does this sound James & Kara?

As this is all keyboard stuff for me, I can easily change key if that would make it easier for 'real' instrument players.
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« Reply #32 on: September 19, 2007, 09:28:37 PM »

Yup,
So that would move it from C to F ?
If so, that's fine with me.
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« Reply #33 on: September 23, 2007, 07:37:02 PM »

Hi,

I haven't forgotten. This will take a bit of time to sort out.

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