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« on: June 18, 2011, 08:48:13 PM » |
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James and I would like to offer this collab in the hope it will fit the project.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2011, 08:49:31 PM » |
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And an mp3
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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MarioD
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« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2011, 11:55:50 PM » |
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This is absolutely beautiful
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elwoodblues1969
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Studiophile,Audiophile & Synthophile.
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« Reply #4 on: June 24, 2011, 03:24:51 PM » |
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A very pretty little ditty & nice fidelity as well. Sorry,but I have to disagree adamantly with Oren about it being artfully mixed,as James's guitar is drowned out by Will's instrumentation by a landslide. I feel that the guitar is the backbone of this song and it deserves to be more present in the mix. -Thom
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« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2011, 03:43:50 PM » |
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Well, when I put this up I never intended to do any more work on it. However, as always, I have a habit of reviewing work some time later. I've made small, but I think significant changes.
Firstly The pad chords fade in far more discretely, then I have lifted both of James' guitar parts. This a very difficult balance to get right. I was bouncing them up and down like yoyos until I was finally (more or less) happy. Finally, I wasn't satified with the ocarina part. It was too shrill and fought for place with the vibraphone, so I dropped it an octave and replaced it with a flute soundfont.
So here is the new version I hope can be considered for the album.
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« Reply #6 on: July 03, 2011, 03:45:12 PM » |
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and mp3
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« Reply #7 on: July 03, 2011, 08:14:55 PM » |
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What a beautiful mix, Maestro ..... Thanks for letting me join in. James
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« Reply #8 on: July 04, 2011, 01:30:50 AM » |
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What a beautiful mix, Maestro ..... James A Super Big +1
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« Reply #9 on: July 04, 2011, 09:25:38 PM » |
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Thanks again
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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« Reply #10 on: July 05, 2011, 08:53:46 AM » |
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... as always, I have a habit of reviewing work some time later. I've made small, but I think significant changes...
Better and better...
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« Reply #11 on: August 09, 2011, 08:57:13 PM » |
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beautiful, it's really the challenge of who will be the best! it's magic. My dream would be that you can all come and play together here in Brittany bises Azell
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« Reply #12 on: August 22, 2011, 07:26:55 PM » |
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This is such a gentle and restfull tune. Wonderfull. The tune and sounds are just perfect. Great, great, great ... !!!
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« Reply #13 on: August 24, 2011, 03:18:11 PM » |
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Splendid tune, so peaceful and so full of harmonies. Perfect for dreaming, looking at clouds passing by. It's like moving back slowly to the time when we were child and were all seems luminous. Thanks for the trip
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« Reply #14 on: August 24, 2011, 05:10:52 PM » |
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ok with Mag. I see very well with this music, turn a mobile above the bed of my granddaughter to make her sleep... and give her sweet dreams
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