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« on: April 24, 2013, 09:08:28 PM » |
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A while ago I posted my 'Ride With Yoshimi'. Well, since then I find I keep coming back to the finale. I think it can stand by itself and is almost degraded by the rest of the composition. The thing is what to do with it. Do I find a new name for it as a complete entity? Do I extend it? Or what? Here it is separated out. What do people think?
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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Oren
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« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2013, 09:19:19 PM » |
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My opinion: it's a full-fledged production in its own right.
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« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2013, 09:24:24 PM » |
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Thanks Oren, that more-or-less is my preference.
As a separate piece I'm going to call it "Yoshimi Rides Home" so it maintains its connection with the original, but has its own identity. I've also been making a few very minor mix level tweaks. I'll repost once I think I've got the most out of it... very carefully!
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2013, 07:12:01 PM » |
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This is a beautiful piece of music. Do not change a thing!
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« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2013, 10:04:18 PM » |
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Oh dear Well actually I did do a bit more fiddling with it, mostly extremely subtle mix level changes, but also a few chords on the front for atmosphere setting. I hope you like the result.
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« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2013, 01:19:53 AM » |
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Subtle... Nicely done
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« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2013, 07:28:24 PM » |
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Thanks Oren. It's always a bit precarious messing with something that's already pretty much there, isn't it?
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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« Reply #7 on: May 05, 2013, 01:12:23 AM » |
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OK so don’t listen to me and change it just to make it better Another one of Will’s winners! It’s a keeper!
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« Reply #8 on: May 06, 2013, 06:50:03 PM » |
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Thanks Mario. I took great care with it, and promise I'll leave it along now!
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song. - Will
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