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kuguar
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« on: April 23, 2008, 11:29:04 AM »

Hi, colleagues,
This something like country song , written for my granddaughter  Alisa

Kuguar

* AlisaSong.mp3 (892.55 KB - downloaded 439 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2008, 03:48:05 PM »

Hi Kuguar,

I'm very particular & selective about country music and this one's pretty impressive for something that's all electronic!
The changes in the intro of this song are fantastic & the solos are top notch...the only thing I was not thrilled with,is the single note piano riffs in the first have of the song-a little bland for my taste.
Perhaps some chords with a bit of reverb on them instead,would wrok well,I think.

Overall though,a job very well done. Cool

Cheers,

Thom
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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2008, 03:51:55 PM »

Your small song pleases me well. It is however very quietly mixed. Starting from 01:18 happens too little. I have a similar song. It is called "Flying" and here you'll find him: http://www.kara-moon.com/index.php?play_song_id=4567

Andreas
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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2008, 04:04:44 PM »

Agreed,

Bring up the over-all level of the production (louder Wink), make the first single-note piano solo more interesting, and you have a winner, here!
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« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2008, 06:41:52 PM »

Very nice catchy tune.

As others have said the level needs to be brought up.

The first piano part could be made a bit more interesting by adding some arpeggios, or note 'roll-overs'.
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« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2008, 07:06:13 PM »

it sounds good !
I agree the overall level is a bit low, compared to the others songs, but apart from technicalities the music is really enjoyable. Great country melodies and good traditional arrangement

Cheers
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« Reply #6 on: April 23, 2008, 07:57:26 PM »

Agreed,

Bring up the over-all level of the production (louder Wink), make the first single-note piano solo more interesting, and you have a winner, here!

+1

If you are using BiaB have it generate some Floyd Cramer parts for you.

Other than the single note piano leads this was a very enjoyable country song.  Heck even with those leads this was a very enjoyable country song but new piano leads would take it over the top IMHO.
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« Reply #7 on: April 24, 2008, 07:20:51 AM »

Nice to hear all of you.Pleased for your comments.I don't know can I meet all of them, but I'l try..
Though I told it's "something like country" only
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« Reply #8 on: April 24, 2008, 10:22:46 PM »

Nice song.
Well played.
Yee-haa.....

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« Reply #9 on: April 27, 2008, 11:41:35 AM »

Here is what was got out after some changes

* AlisaSong3-mod1.mp3 (892.55 KB - downloaded 501 times.)
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« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2008, 04:13:36 PM »

Oh, ok you did a slightly different version
Nice ! Cool there's more clarity in this one
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