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« on: May 30, 2008, 09:51:31 AM »

This is remake in BiaB of my old (I'm not very young too) song about Riga and love, of course

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« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2008, 08:04:53 AM »

'lovely' melodies, deep dark voice and nice jazz arrangements
I enjoyed it although I don't understand a word..  Cheesy

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« Reply #2 on: May 31, 2008, 10:23:20 AM »

Now that's some cool jazz I like 
Those horns are very well done !

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« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2008, 04:56:52 PM »

Now that's some cool jazz I like 
Those horns are very well done !

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+1 ... especially the horns
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« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2008, 07:52:14 AM »

Cool!
You have a very pleasant voice. wOO

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« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2008, 07:22:39 PM »

Thanks for all of you from France, Germany, UK !
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« Reply #6 on: June 02, 2008, 05:42:25 AM »

'lovely' melodies, deep dark voice and nice jazz arrangements
I enjoyed it although I don't understand a word..  Cheesy

Agreed! Your vocal recording is very intimate, with no reverb or fancy tricks, and the lyrics are clearly audible.

For my taste, the backing tracks would sound better without the trumpet/trombone "hits" that punctuate the production. They sound harsh and unnecessary in the context of the mellow piano, bass, drums, and melody instruments.

Good song, great performance Cool

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« Reply #7 on: June 02, 2008, 07:43:49 AM »


For my taste, the backing tracks would sound better without the trumpet/trombone "hits" that punctuate the production.

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« Reply #8 on: June 02, 2008, 11:14:35 AM »

Cool jazzy tune. I like the layd-back vocals. Reminds me a bit of Paolo Conte :cool:
Very well done!

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« Reply #9 on: June 02, 2008, 06:18:59 PM »

To Oren:There are my changes. J have cut out the "hits" from 2 chorus, when piano playing, and remined without any changes 1-3-4 choruses (for experiment) The end is changed a bit also . But in my opinion composition became more "artifical", not like previous Band

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« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2008, 04:12:35 PM »

...The end is changed a bit also. But in my opinion composition became more "artifical"...

Yes, the first version is better  Smiley

Perhaps applying some gentle reverb to the last note and letting it fade out naturally would a nice "final touch"?

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